Fiction-Art-Author

@grezelle Paired with one of mine, as on my home page. Pearwood's 2024A feature log Steve's suggestions on how to leave a good comment... Tell the artist what caught your eye, something your particularly liked or didn't like. Tell the artist something you think they could have done differently or better. Suggest an alternate title; it tells the artist what you saw in the image. Interact with the artwork, continue its story. Ask the artist how or why they did something. If nothing else, even "Ooh, pretty!" or "Oh, ick!" is a lot more information than no comment at all. Enjoy!

A small jungle world who’s location in the galaxy is known to only a very small number of people in Stark’s government, the top few are the “Armstar”, the “Grand Guardian”, and few high ranking officers in the military specifically within the Royal Marines. On this planet marines who were chosen are brought here to be made into Royal Guards. Before leaving for Tiss the candidates are administered a non-lethal toxic that blinds and deafens them until they’re given a counter agent that reverses it. After arriving, these 20 candidates for the next 5 years of their lives will endure intense training that outweighs what they went through becoming marines, royal marine training has a mortality rate of which not all despite the edges granted by genetic enhancements are still not a guarantee success, by mortality rate some think its means actually dying which is not the case rather merely getting hurt by the training to the point they can’t continue, that said very few people have actually